五年級(jí)英語(yǔ)作文及點(diǎn)評(píng)：My English Teacher

 　　My English Teacher

　　Miss Tang is my English teacher. She’s very pretty. She is tall and thin. She has two big eyes and a small mouth. Her hair is long. She likes cats very much. And she likes singing and dancing, too. Her English is very good. We often play games in English classes. She is very kind to us. We all love her.

　　【要領(lǐng)點(diǎn)評(píng)】

　　這篇作文的題目是“我的英語(yǔ)老師”，是一篇介紹人物的作文。小作者開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山，直接點(diǎn)題，首先介紹了英語(yǔ)老師的姓名，然后逐一介紹了她的外貌特征、喜好、英語(yǔ)水平、上課特點(diǎn)以及師生情感等。

　　小朋友們?cè)趯?xiě)作文時(shí)，要注意使用自己 熟悉的詞[組]，以免寫(xiě)出一些錯(cuò)句子。寫(xiě)作時(shí)要注意意思連貫、語(yǔ)句通順、標(biāo)點(diǎn)正確、書(shū)寫(xiě)清晰、規(guī)范等。